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Jarvis Hall – This section of the Long Walk contains single, double and quad dorms, primarily for freshmen and sophomores. It is rumored that the doubles were originally designed for students while the singles across the hallway were intended for their servants. In actuality, the single rooms were single bedrooms, which opened into living areas, which are currently the doubles and the hallway, and six rooms retain this layout. As of the 2008 school year, the massive Long Walk Reconstruction project has been completed, and the dorms are built in a classic style.

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Jarvis Hall – This section of the Long Walk contains six or eight person suites, with a mix of single and double occupancy rooms, complete with private bathroom and common area overlooking the Quad and Chapel. It is rumored that the suite doubles were originally designed for students while the singles were intended for their servants. Fall 2008 saw the end of the massive Long Walk Reconstruction Project, as both Jarvis and Seabury reopened. The Jarvis dormitories now have most modern amenities, including air conditioning, yet the classic Collegiate Gothic architecture is still maintained.

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Today, Trinity College attracts students from all around the country and the world and remains one of the most academically competitive liberal arts colleges in the United States.

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In 2009, The Princeton Review gave Trinity a 95 (out of 100) for selectivity.

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In 2009, The Princeton Review gave Trinity a 95 (out of 100) for selectivity. The admissions rate tends to hover in between 30% and 40%, making it a generally competitive and selective school. [2]